Happy Microfiction Friday! Today, we’ve got a fun little piece about a struggling chemist and his attempts at uncovering the teachings of a long-dead mentor, “Playing with Fire.”
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Playing with Fire
By J. Louis
Willard squinted at the journal, trying to decipher its faded words.
Not even Thaddeus, the famed chemist, could overcome mortality.
But perhaps his teachings might.
The lab smelled of pungent, fragrant chemicals.
Just a drop of this, and a sprinkle of that…?
Jade fire erupted from the glass vial, blinding him. The smell of burnt hair and smoke lingered in the lab.
Willard fingered the spot above his right eye where his eyebrow should have been. He groaned and cradled his forehead in his palms.
That ratio wouldn't do at all.
But it was as good a start as any.
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Without further ado, here’s the prompt for this week’s drabble…
This Week’s Drabble Prompt
Write a story inspired by: a journal.
Journals are windows into the lives of others, and contrary to what you might think, you don’t have to be a writer to get a lot of value from journaling. Great leaders all over the world have used journals to chronicle their feelings, and scientists have used journals to ponder their thoughts ahead of their big breakthroughs.
So my question to you is there: how will you use a journal to tell a microfiction story?
That’s all I’ve got for now. Until next time… keep writing!
- Josh
Willard nearly found the mortality he was seeking to avoid! Perhaps it’s not supposed to be funny, but it made me chuckle nevertheless. I wonder if the old teacher met with his fate in such an experiment.
I love the last sentence. It made me go back and reread several times with a smile.